[committed] wwwdocs: Editorial changes to the LTO section.

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Gerald Pfeifer July 6, 2020, 7:59 p.m.
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diff --git a/htdocs/gcc-10/changes.html b/htdocs/gcc-10/changes.html
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@@ -143,17 +143,18 @@  You may also want to check out our
     <ul>
       <li>
         A new binary <a href="https://gcc.gnu.org/onlinedocs/gcc-10.1.0/gcc/lto-dump.html"><code>lto-dump</code></a>
-        has been added.  The program can dump various
-        information about a LTO bytecode object file.
+        has been added. It dumps various information about LTO bytecode
+	object files.
       </li>
       <li>
-	Parallel phase of the LTO can automatically detect a running make's
-	jobserver or can fall back to number of available cores.
+	The parallel phase of the LTO can automatically detect a running
+	make's jobserver or fall back to number of available cores.
       </li>
       <li>
-        The LTO bytecode can be compressed with
+        The LTO bytecode can be compressed with the
         <a href="https://facebook.github.io/zstd/"><code>zstd</code></a>
-        algorithm.  Configure script can automatically detect the <code>zstd</code> support.
+        algorithm.  The configure script automatically detects 
+	zstd support.
       </li>
       <li>Most <code>--param</code> values can now be specified at
 	  translation unit granularity. This includes all parameters controlling